You’re “done” you say? That begs a few questions. Like:
- Are you finished with the rough draft/first “complete” manuscript?
- Are you finished with all the updates of your first draft?
- Have you given up altogether?
- Are you ready to start on another title?
- What’s next?
First draft finish line reached!
Typing “The End” at the bottom of the last page can be extremely satisfying. It’s not as mind blowing as holding a copy of your first book in your hands, but it’s still pretty darn cool. And it deserves a celebration of some kind. Take your significant other out for dinner or go play golf with the gang you’ve been ignoring for the past several months. Play with your kids, if you have any, or try making some. <shrug> Walk the dog. Enjoy life away from the keyboard for a while.
If you’re really smart, you’ll ignore that manuscript for a couple weeks, maybe even a month, just to let it cool off. Even if you’re a big-time author–and if you are, I can’t imagine why you’re reading this–you need some objectivity. The cooling off period will let you be more objective about what needs fixing, and there’s always something.
I suggest reading the full manuscript out loud, with feeling. Seriously. It’ll slow your brain down long enough to allow you to spot some errors. You won’t get them all; no one does. But you’ll get a bunch. Many writers decide on a re-write at this point. Many, like me, don’t. Some writers fill out missing chunks, add setting, trim dialog, hunt down adverbs and pet phrases, or focus on tightening text. You’ll need to do some or all of this. (How much? That’s hard to say. I just finished my eleventh novel, and one of my readers found errors in the third revised manuscript.)
At some point, you’ll declare your brainchild ready for the world. It’s not. You still need to run it by your First Readers, that cadre of trusted souls who will crawl through your words in search of every niggling little booboo, every innocent tyop, and every literary faux pas they can find. When they do find them–and they will–praise them to the heavens. Treat them to chocolate and adult beverages, for they have done you an invaluable service; they’ve saved you from looking like an idiot, or worse.
Fix everything! Then, and only then, are you ready for the next step.
To hell with it! I’m done.
Sadly, quite a few writers give up before they reach the finish line. There’s no shame in that. Writing a novel is hard, and writing a good one is even harder. And just imagine how many people you know will be able to say “I told you so!” (They will, too, because they can; they’re not-so-secretly pleased that you failed at something they couldn’t even imagine doing.) But, if you’re still reading this, I suspect there’s a part of you that isn’t ready to abandon all the time and effort you’ve already spent on your project. Maybe you just need a break, a little time to get your head straight and your creative side re-energized. That’s okay, too.
While thus occupied, consider re-reading my thoughts on what to do when you’re stuck. You’ll find them here. You wouldn’t be the first writer to think about quitting just because the job turned out to be harder than you thought it would be. So give these possible fixes a shot. Who knows? You might find yourself moving forward again.
Ready to start on something new?
Cool! But before you jump headlong into the next project, give some thought to what you learned doing the last one. Were there mistakes you’d rather not repeat? Knowing what you know now, would you have approached your last book differently? How much of that will apply toward the new project? Why not write those thoughts down where you can review them as you move on. You’ve written a book and learned some valuable lessons. Don’t ignore ’em!
Okay, manuscript, it’s time. Make me famous. Or rich. Or something.
Much as I’d like to squeeze this in here, it really deserves its own spot. So, I’ll tackle that next time. For now, I’m curious to know how other people feel when they reach the finish line for a first draft. Relief? Exuberance? Disappointment? Share your thoughts in the comment section below.
I’m utterly terrified of tackling a novel. Maybe its because I’m old and I feel I’ll never finish it. Better to write a poem or a short story that I can take thru the steps you describe which are applicable to other forms, too, especially the “resting” period. Absolutely critical to let it sit for a while.
Writing a novel is a bit like eating an elephant. It takes a while, and it’s best done a bite at a time. 《Smile》
It really does feel great to hold your book in your hands. What’s not so great is getting the word out there so the book sells. This is the hard part. I’m doing book signings and attending school fairs – even had a man buy my book right out of my hands at the fair! But still no significant bites. So while it’s exciting to see your book in print, it pretty well stinks when reality hits that you’re book hasn’t hit the big time. This article was excellent because you really do need to tweak it over and over, and put it away for awhile.
Indeed. The realization that the writing isn’t the hard part is often the toughest one to accept.
Good points Josh, no matter how many times you read, edit, chant or caress your manuscript, there will be errors or glitches. No manuscript or book is perfect, nor will it ever be. Giving it your best effort should be rewarding enough. Remember, not just anyone gets out of bed and writes a novel.
Can’t say I’ve exactly caressed any of my manuscripts (yet), but who knows? If it’ll help, I’m game!
Thanks, enjoy your blog. Finished your novel, Oh Bits and spotted an error at the end. Jason for Jared, Amazon Kindle, Oh Bits on page 3347 ? Knew who you were referring to, but it did cause me to pause. Thought I had missed a character. Love your style of writing, I have a long way to go. Thanks again for the tips. Hubert
Howdy! I did another review after the e-book went live, and I found several things I needed to correct. I’m hoping I got the one you mentioned, too. You’d better be careful about finding my mistakes, or I’ll try to enlist you as a First Reader!